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Originally Posted by BIGJake111
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As a marketing initiative, this is exceedingly weak. I'd be shocked if you receive any donations. Let me explain:
- What exactly are you "marketing?"
- As far as I can figure out, you are giving people the opportunity to aid you in getting a car, and in return for doing so, they get their name added to the car's dash
- BUT: you don't mention this ANYWHERE...
- It's only until someone clicks on the "Donate" button that they learn this
- And THEN, you don't bother to show or tell how contributors' names will be displayed...
- Will they be inscribed on a plate? Written with a Sharpie?? Scribbled with a Crayola? I have no idea, because you never say
This is a pathetic job of marketing, plus I'm sure you'll turn off many potential contributors by telling about your poor ruined Boxster. Not many people are going to give money to a high school student who had a Porsche. Additionally, the story about the "altercation" and police report is just plain confusing. Who cares? To the average person logging onto the gofundme page, you're just a spoiled kid with a confused story and a half-assed pitch for donations.
Good luck.
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2000 Boxster S, 6 speed, Sport Package, Litronics, LED tail lights, LNE IMS-B, OBC, Skybreaker wind deflector, Arctic Silver/Graphite Grey
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