modified beetle now on ebay - check it out - 986 Forum - The Community for Porsche Boxster & Cayman Owners

mach schnell · 04-26-2006, 07:31 AM

hey, it's like dating that kind of hot chick to finally get the really hot chick - ya gotta start somewhere!

SD987 · 04-26-2006, 08:26 AM

If it's not too late to edit your ebay listing you may want to break the text up, it reads like the label on a soup can. We amateur authors call these breaks "paragraphs". A few bullet points might not hurt either.

You obviously spent a ton of time and money modifying the car. It would be nice to see each of these get its literary due as you have some nice mods and included extras that could easily be overlooked.

Sorry if I sound like an a-hole, just trying to give you a reader/buyer's perspective.

mach schnell · 04-26-2006, 08:52 AM

sd - thanx for the input - actually working on that right now. When i created the add i actually cut and pasted in the text from Word and spent a little while making it look nice and spaced apart so that everything really got highlighted. but, when it was processed through ebay's set up process it turned in to that mess! hopefully in the next hour i'll figure out how to get it to read a little nicer. thanx for checking it out.

mach schnell · 04-26-2006, 10:27 AM

word salad problem has been corrected and the ad is now much more visually appealing to the eye! thanx for checking it out -bigger thanx if you buy it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!