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Originally Posted by jaykay
deep in the country
long sweeper, top down
hard on the throttle; stars above
the glow of the head lights in the mist
flat six growl.........nothing like it
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It's a senryu, 5 lines.
Haiku is 3 lines 17 syllables 5-7-5.
Nice senryu, reminds me of driving at Point Reyes at night with the top down.