+1 on what everyone else said.
Photos.... It looks like you just grabbed a few old photos rather than taking fresh ones for the sale. Selling on CL at a good price is a competition. You are marketing and promoting your car, trying to get top $$$ against other sellers and buyers looking to score a deal. Best view, close pic first, then show off the highlights.
Hushypushy takes great pics. Here's my uneducated notes:
See more shots here:
Hi-Res 986 pictures