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If it's not too late to edit your ebay listing you may want to break the text up, it reads like the label on a soup can. We amateur authors call these breaks "paragraphs". A few bullet points might not hurt either.
You obviously spent a ton of time and money modifying the car. It would be nice to see each of these get its literary due as you have some nice mods and included extras that could easily be overlooked.
Sorry if I sound like an a-hole, just trying to give you a reader/buyer's perspective.
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