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Thoreau
Writing a paper about if i could live a simple life like Thoreau did or not. I am using my car as evidence that i could. How do i get the point about the cars simplicity and the purpose built sense of it across, this is my second time around and what my teacher originally critiqued was that. "if you drove a 92 dodge dart i could buy this a little more" "wait a sec you're talking about your minimalist car, and its a PORSCHE"
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You probably shouldn't write English papers about your car. It will come off conceited. Rather, you probably should let others brag for you at this stage of your life.
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the assignment required personal evidence. The paper is about how simple things can be the best things, the only simple thing in my life i particularly enjoy, is my car.
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hehe.. Quite conceited, but you are a 16 year old teenager. :)
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Some think Thoreau's efforts to "live a simple life" were conceited. Maybe it is fitting.
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Wife Keeping chickens Helping elderly neighbors in need free of charge Our garden / yard in top shape Feeding backyard birds, seeing new ones The Porsche is great fun, but I pay for that. The other things are free of charge and what makes me.......me. |
My bidding point is the lack of excess. Money or physical value isn't something im going for with this essay, rather how a small car with 2 seats can be better than a large tank of an SUV. It is still the whole less is more, but not in a financial sense. Really wasn't looking to brag to the teacher as many of the tires on the jacked up trucks in the parking lot at my school are worth more than my car, much less the F250s and Rams they are attached to. I live among a large congregation of the modern hillbilly, but no one said they don't have some money floating around haha.
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hell I just want to put new struts on. Thor who? lol you guys are deeeeep
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my english teacher suggested Catcher in the Rye. That was a long time ago. weird speaking to you with the age diff. and all . I am 52, 3 kids ...oldest is.........wait for it.........12 BAM. My son wrenches with me on the Box and I pay for it just like you and your dad! Why Darkstar. (always reminds me of the Gratefull Dead)
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43, son is 22, daughter 24. We were all there once, bud. STAY IN SCHOOL and make the most of it. The bar scene sucks for meeting women. HS was party town back in the 90's....lots of chicks. |
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Jake I thought you were Darkstar, sorry too many Dead shows...like the pevious post says ....stay in school.
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Reminds me of when Ceelo Green performed John Lennon's "Imagine" in gold jewlery and a fur coat. lol
I would change the focus of the paper. Using your P-car to compare to Thoreau's lifestyle is just a bit classless. :) |
you could take the macro-environmental approach in your proof - your car is simple because it is used as opposed to new (ie, you impacted the planet less by recycling someone else's waste, rather than requiring that a whole bunch of new metal and plastic be bent into purpose to serve your base needs - and transportation is a base need in the suburban environment we have created for ourselves). also it is lighter so uses less fuel and requires less material to make. it will also last longer than a kia.
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good idea radium will likely fit that in
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It's a luxury car. No matter the context, you will look bad using that car in this context. This is where age can help you see what I didn't at your age. Only hope is to make it into an obvious joke. |
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